Doubts of a chemical romance
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Kale Ryoko
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 7:39 am    Post subject: Doubts of a chemical romance Reply with quote


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//"Relax baby... that's a good girl. Hold still, it'll be over soon. ". - From First To Last

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The girl had been doused in petrol.
It coated her skin and clothes like thick oil, dripping from her hair and fingers as pearl tears, illuminated a fiery orange under the sunset of New Caldari. He had noticed she could barely stand straight on this pier, wondering whether it was the bruises that laced her figure or the fumes choking her of oxygen that were the cause. Maybe she had finally given up; it was no use after all. An arm kept her still, a hand brushing against her soft cheeks that once streamed tears, her eyes were swollen a heart-breaking red, one remained almost completely bloodshot.

The metallic snap of a lighter broke his thought of mind.
The Intaki inhaled deeply on the cigarette, kneeling so he was now at face level, he blew a thick stream of smoke directly into the Caldari’s eyes, making them fill and burn. He groaned a reply.

‘What’s that Kale? I didn’t hear you; you’re going to have to speak up.’

Kale Ryoko remained silent, although it wasn’t really voluntary, as his mandible hung lifelessly broken and dislocated at the jaw line.

‘… Hmm… still have nothing to say?’ He paused, as if waiting for a reply to his obvious rhetoric. ‘… Ah, so be it. You’re a boring cunt, Mr. Ryoko; I just wanted to point that out.’

The star finally disappeared under the horizon behind the girl, the sea remaining a bed of cold, liquid crystal lava, as it slapped quietly against the pier stands. This day had supposed to have been safe. This day had supposed to have been perfect. Kale felt himself fall hard against the concrete, he’d been let go. He groaned painfully as his face took some of the impact, gravel pieces gluing themselves into his open wounds. He slowly got up to his knees, his eyes immediately moving over to his .459 tactical issue which lay only a few feet away from him.

A car door closed.
A car window opened.

‘Goodbye for now, Ryoko. See you in space.’

And like a satanic firefly, Kale watched as a glowing cigarette shot out from the car. It hung in the air for what could have been several lifetimes… before connecting with the concrete.

No!

The floor ignited.
Like the sea, the concrete exploded, sending flames rushing over her body in a gust of screams. Kale cried through his broken lips, snatching the weapon from the ground he got to his feet, running over to the girl. She flailed in agony as he tried to get close but the flames were too strong. The sound of a car was heard leaving in the distance.



She fell untidily, an angel of fire screaming for mercy.

I’m sorry, God oh please, I’m sorry.

He aimed.

Forgive me.

He fired… falling to his knees as the screams finally stopped.

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//"The sound of victory, blowing up your world. " - From First To Last

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Yuki Li
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 5:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Shocked
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Kyoko Sakoda
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 7:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

/me cuddles an emu
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 3:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I enthusiastically endorse this product and/or service.

Ahem, I mean, kickass story!
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 3:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Fucking.

Pwn.
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 5:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Kale, you're a masochist. Well written though Razz
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 01, 2006 1:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

hmmm
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 4:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Me want more, very good opening story, WRITE more.
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 3:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Christ! Crying or Very sad
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 6:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Euch, I knew I shouldn't have read that a second time Crying or Very sad

I'm gonna go play some MCR riffs now...
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Kale Ryoko
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 6:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

lol, talk about thread ressurrection!

thanks for the comments though <3

/hugs Meb - big emo.
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 1:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You call that a resurrection?

Heh

Welcome to (the imminent) Page four, Mr Ryoko. Another piece of yours to accompany the other one...fireflies.
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 2:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

xXemofailXx

<333
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 2:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Jade, now extra crispy.
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 5:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ah fuck I read it a third time Crying or Very sad

Meb goes looking for the guitar...
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