I need some HELPZORZ!

 
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Isolde DeKatherine
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 10:34 pm    Post subject: I need some HELPZORZ! Reply with quote

Right so here is my uber super top secret plea for help (once in a lifetime deal!) Shocked

Anyways I'm trying to hammer out some stuff for my 3rd piece of writing which includes dialogue Embarassed which I ermmm not so good at Wink

Anywho basically it goes like so:
Isolde wakes up and goes to meet with her dead, now alive brother and picks at him until he talks.
He worked for Ishukone as part of a security/patrol force who 'wandered' onto something he shouldn't have, got sent on a mission and died, or so everyone thought.
Turns out Ishukone set him up and is now after Isolde ( hold me davlos! ) and he's here to take her away into hiding (possible intro for omerta??)

anywho any hints, tips, etc etc etc (shintoko this is all you Razz ) would be appreciated in how I could possibly set this up so it's not just a jumble of words.
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